|Reviews for Desperation|
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
*shudder* Wow. This was amazingly powerful. I love that last line you wrote: "It's a reminder all right/of just how weak I am." You can hear the undercurrent, so to speak, of those words - sarcasm or black humor or whatever you want to call it. *shrug*
This was absolutely-stunningly-brilliant. You are an -amazing- writer! Straight to my favorites ...
Gute nacht, tomodachi