Reviews for False Idol
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
konban wa

Hm. This was an interesting one. Truthfully, I loved it. I absolutely loved it. Beautiful imagery here - with the use of specific idol names like Baal and Asherah. That was brilliant. And I definitely loved that last line: "And I change my name to Elijah."

Wow. Just - wow.

Zaijen

-Shan-
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Great first stanza-I love how you builded on the idea of a simple barrier. Everything was concise and refined. Amazing work here.

Keep writing!