|Reviews for Ever After Happiness|
| life like whoa chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
I don't even know where to begin..
this was stunningly beautiful.
I loved the repetition of "Once upon a time"
and the flow.
the balance between understanding the characters
feelings and learning the story was incredible.
I am at a loss for words as to try and explain to you how amazing I felt this piece was..
amazing. I also wanted to thank you
for your review. it means alot to hear
a writer at your level to compliment an amateur
like myself in such a high spirited manner.
I can't wait to read more of your work.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
The phrase "once upon a time" has such a feeling of hope to it and then when I read it the final time in this poem, it breaks my heart. I like how all the small stories somehow tie-in together and show that life isn't that perfect, but it almost feels like it could be. This poem is something I can relate with because the honesty in it is so touching. Take care.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
That was really sad. But, be of good cheer the end of the story is not written yet.