It wasn't even funny. Not until the last line, that is. Then suddenly it was all funny.

"Hypothetical maggots of love." XD

Interesting. The ending did make me chuckle as it sounds like something I might say in horror myself. Interesting perspective on Eric's part, though.

haha I love that

"Hypothetical maggots...Hypothetical maggots of love!" haha best line ever

"Hypothetical maggots of love!"

-That line was pure genius. Amazing.

I know a guy that DID use maggots to clean out a wound. They are really affective! They eat all the dead flesh and stop at the good flesh. That is, if you can keep them from getting out and getting all over the hostpital room.

Now where was I? Oh yes, great story!

I like it! I was kinda worried in the beginning that you were going to make fun of addicts or something and that wouldn't be funny, but no, you pulled it off! I disagree with the other reviewers though, I think that the length in perfect, if it was longer it would get way drawn out and boring. I'm adding this to my C2 right now!

Write on!

I love the end! Maggots. Teehee.

Loved it! Short but to the point.

Funny! My favorite line: “Hypothetical maggots of love!”

wow thats crazy! I like it

I have to admit, this did make me laugh. Especially the end line "hypothetical maggots of love"

I wish it had been a bit longer, but what was there was good

JAR

One correction: "and concluded, "and that's..."". The "a" should be capitalized. It's a new sentence.

Other than that very minor thing, this story made me laugh. The last line was especially funny. This whole thing is quite funny, especially how Eric gets all heated when he starts talking about the maggots. The mood is very good and it's well-done, despite its short length. Great job.

I love the last line. ] "Hypothetical maggots of love." That made me laugh. I hope it was supposed to.