I was wondwering when you're going to update?

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Another great chapter. Love the last few lines especially.

i liked the descriptions of everything

it's like being intoxicated and on a very good trip

where everything seems so floaty, insequence and melodic

me want more

I really like how you went back in time and then to the present. I loved the descriptions of all the feelings and the events. Brendon seems likable enough and you've written it in such a way that he doesn't seem entirely like an asshole. I like it.

Will next chap be on Allison. I would love to know her thoughts. Lovely chap.

Keep writing...

Wow. I really like this. I like how at first, there's no names and every thought and movement is there. It's very realistic. I like how the events jump back and forth, just like someone's thoughts. I'm excited for more. This is a good start.