Reviews for Blind
DarkestNite chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
This is WAY to short...why so short?
pageleaf chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Wow. This is quite brilliant. It captures specific characters and emotions in such a short amount of words. I actually wouldn't mind reading this filled out into a longer story, but this is just amazing as it is.
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Rarely does a story make me feel all fuzzy inside.

This one did.
cormorant chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
This was my face after reading this: .
Subbie chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
:) it made me smile. Keep going!
i kiss to tell chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
so sweet! i loved it! (just a stupid question but what is a 'oneword'...)
channel-violet chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
If you did that in a minute then you are my hero. I just use oneword to find a word to get inspired to.

Beautifully written as usual. I also like you can actually describe everything in small words.

Keep on writing.

-Mika
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
cute and sweet. I like it.
lackluster chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
the beginning almost had me set up for a heartbreak by the end, but my dear, you actually made me smile. it's sweet.
Icrome chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
aw very sweet, enjoyed it
smile persephone chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Simple and sweet. Ah, the joys of femmeslashy love. You've made my day, my dear.
hazy scribbles chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
wonderful, as is all your work.

concise, meaningful, beautiful, i could go on and on... i like the contradictions of "that annoys you" to the eventual kiss on the lips. it gives this short story an extra little "oomph" to it. a funny sort of irony (i feel like that isn't quite the word, but it will do... for now).

never stop writing. my heart would utterly b.r.e.a.k.
Mona Lisa Smiles chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
This sucks.
hey maria chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
I always cheat on oneword, I take longer than a minute.