Reviews for Remaining Out of Place
Filipina chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Good job. I really liked it.
Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
I will be honest that I read this poem with two wide eyes open. The words flowed beautifully and the poem seemed to come alive. Maybe it was something that felt all to familiar. I won't bother you with my inconsequential thoughts, I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this poem and its depth. Great work!


Lost in A World of Pain
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
I like it alot! Pat on the back to you! lol

i love u!

U rock!
Gypsy Jasmine chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Your poem left me awestruck. It was beautiful, in so many ways. All your words fit together so perfectly, like a jigsaw puzzle. They clicked, expect the sound they made wasn't a clicking. It was... a beautiful sound. "She had dreams in her back pocket." Beautiful.

Thankyou for making my day.

he knows you chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Do you really feel like you're all alone. You're not. There are people who care about you, and even if you don't want to believe it, there's a God. He loves you.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
I care too. This was so...strong. Just the feelings, about being weak and helpless and alone, I can relate. Especially right now this moment. I guess we aren't as alone as we thought. This was wonderful. An amazing song. Great job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
Wow... What a great poem/song. I have to add this to my favourites.

And by the way, I care.

Amazing job!