Reviews for The Way You Talk |
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twelvewindedsky chapter 1 . 8/14/2009 did you know there is nearly the same story on ? only difference i can tell is that the names are harry and ginny there. I don't know if you happen to be the author on fanfiction, or which one of you may have copied the other if you aren't the same person. just thought you might want to know -majorbibliophile |
soulful butterfly chapter 1 . 8/19/2007 um wow. i'm not even sure what to say. i guess, how do you continue with this story? it seems that you do a lot in the first chapter and that seems to take away from the story as a whole. most of these are really good but you do so much in the forst chapter that i don't know if you know where you could or should take them after that. |
Ryette chapter 1 . 5/15/2007 I actually really liked this...usually I hate things where the language is that crude but since it was the whole entire plot I didn't mind at all and loved it! Hehe, that sounded a bit perverted. But seriously, good job :) -Ryette |
CMCRD chapter 1 . 5/15/2007 I enjoyed this story a lot. It was well detailed and believable. |