Another great poem! I particularly love the organization of it. Them being neatly organized into four-line paragraphs really complete the feel. I'm looking forward, as always to seeing more poetry from you.

By the way, I may try and start a couple poems soon, but don't get your hopes up for anything good. Songs are my thing, and always have been, so if my stuff's a complete flop, we know why. XD.

I'm still happy, though. Had an oppurtunity to bash someone who gave me a ridiculous review so I'm all chuckling like the evil genius I am. Catch ya' later!

-Stewart