|Reviews for Transparency Interrupted|
| abba12 chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
You realise I'm actually trying to find something to critisize in all of these because I hate it when people say my stuff is great and dont give any constructive critisism. Its like theyre too insecure to and also makes me feel like theyre too insecure to even say if they dont like it, which just makes me disregard them lol
Well I honestly can't find anything to critisize. I guess its harder to critisize free verse for its structure hehe, but still.
Another really well written poem, I love it as always. I can definitly relate... I don't care if I'm insulted just say it don't whisper about me behind my back heh.
| S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Good job _ I think this speaks to a lot of different people, I liked the question "I can't seem to decide/What it is I want" because it really shows that although you've built yourself up for what the other person will say, you've also accepted that it may change the relationship. I loved this, it made me think. Keep it up.