Oh, another story! Sounds interesting...

Stylistically, this was pretty difficult for me to follow at first. I read the first chapters, and decided I probably wouldn't read any longer, because the style was so different from what I'm used to... but something urged me to read the updates, and I'm very glad I did. I feel as though I've delved upon something new and quite the find. This poetic tone of yours, in the almost nonchalant, autobiographical way, is absolutely thrilling. Brilliang sculpted and unique, I'm very impressed.

I love the style this is writen on.

Interesting character.

This part was sad :(

Of course, there's a difference between thinking about committing the perfect murder and actually doing it :P

:D Im so happy to see you posted something. Im loving this, really dark, a bit depressing. Is there a third part? Or maybe more?

Keep writing! .