Reviews for Grievance
Ulquiorra9000 chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
I like how self-acknowledging this poem is, and the curious balance between bravely admitting a fault and being bitter about it too. nice!
CantabileAria chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Your poetry is so close to home. It aches to read the words
SMTS chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
This was a rather intriguing piece. It seemed to be written in the point of view of someone that had been emotionally hurt by someone he or she trusted. The repetition of what "You" said was a lovely literary device.

Keep up the good work!

K3k
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I liked the repitition in this, and the ending was really nifty with the 'A day and day/A month and...' part.

Good work!