Reviews for Drunk
Fish E chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
This expressed (in my opinion) a really good take on how alcohol, or any drug, takes over someone's life. I can relate to this, even though I myself have never been an alocholic. I have associated with them, and I'm sure they'd say this poem is how they feel.
Halfbloodlycan chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
This line seemed a little awkward: Nor I do wanted to have feelings

and seems like it should be: Nor do I want to have feelings

also, I'd suggest putting it as a poem in format. That's what it seems like to me.
sdffds chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Wow, very powerful and kind of sad. 'a blade slicing my feelings away' was a very good ?example? I don't know the word for it. :) But it was good, made your poem stronger.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
"Once in the stupor state"-I love how you phrased that line. It just made it stick out for me.