|Reviews for smile|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
This is beautiful. I don't really have any criticism. Lovely metaphors. Great work.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
The last four lines are beautifully contrasting. The feeling of being alone and loney seems to drift into this dark laugh, this dying smile. I don't know, but I loved it. The first stanza was just beautiful and amazing. Wonderful job.