Just out of curiosity, why remove it? People should at least be able to see it. I was honestly EXCITED to read it. D:
-Syrina Kamar

I remember when I first read this one-shot I wasn't registered but it was one of the few works I copied the URL for in case I ever decided to create an account.

It was a gorgeous story that brought a lump to my throat and tears to my eyes.

Loved it and please keep writing (:

I remember that this story broke my heart the first time I read it. I read it again sometime later and had to pinch my cheeks to stop myself from bawling. Thanks again, for writing such a great piece.

I read this story a while back and gosh, I still love it!

I have to say you have everything you said about England was spot on. Even the underground, which is something even I haven't figured out. GCSEs suck. Man U? Why not Arsenal eh? Ah well, I'll let you off on that one. D

A wonderful story. Truly captured me.

HC

xx

Hmm, you know the only reason I read this was because your work was plagiarised? So, I'm almost glad, but not really. I think this was absolutely perfect.

i didn't think this story would be as great as people say. i was wrong. it's one of the best stories i've ever read. you made me cry.

Ah gee, this story is so sad! I'm freaking crying.

I loved it, though him dying was just too sad.

no. it's too sad! why can't it be happy? why? why?

okay, my hissy fit is done now. this was a really good story. really really good. i just wish he would have lived. but i can see that the story has more meaning this way. so good job. (claps for you)

so beautiful.

i enjoyed reading this little piece very much.

thank you.

Definitely a tear-jerker; that'd explain why I'm crying right now.

Wow. That really was a beautiful story... but, so, so sad. :(

Great job!

Beautiful.

AH!11

OMG! I FREAKN STARTED TO H8 U!1

Y'D U HAVE TO KILL HIM?

I WAS HOPING DAT HE'D JUS GO INTO A COMA OR SUMTHN N DEN CUM OUT OF IT N ADMIT HIS LOVE FOR HR OR SUMTHN!1

I CRIED SO SO SO HARD AT THIS!

I SWEAR I JUST KEPT ON N KEPT ON!1

U R GREAT GREAT WRITER THO N I LOVE UR VRK I JUST H8 U FOR KILLING HIM LIKE THAT!1!11

but i guess u had write an effective story so its fine...but i hate cryin so bad at thins!

n even tho it was a short story it made me cry like hel!

also it was surprising bcuz all da other works of urs r humorous and happy even "maybe you were the one" wasnt so effective as this one.

KEEP IT UP!

BUT DO TRY TO KEEP HIM ALIVE NEXT TIME PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH WATEVER TOPPING U WANT ON TOP!

~drama princess2b D

Bah!

Thats really all I have to say. BahBahBahBah!

... Bah.

Nah, really though. I liked it, just... sadness. Sigh. I hate sadness.

Bah.

omgosh this story made me cry so much!

brilliantly written :)

i love it.

Eps! I almost cried, which is very surprising... you have no idea how much I love this story, I can't even describe it.

Amazing job :)