Reviews for Somebody Save Me
SarahSupaStar chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Really great! It kindof reminds me of my favorite poem, "Someone Should Have Told Him". I like how you're calling out for help, and then it's too late. Awesome!
Striped Candycane chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Simple, but works. The short verses were interesting. They almost made me think of someone panting, as if they had been running a long way and couldn't go on any longer...an effect that works really well with the theme.

Keep Writing!