Reviews for Trouble |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() It was... well, kinda OOC for Reese, but I'm guessing that was the point. Update again soon. Oh, and that is just the stupidest exercise ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD XD How awesomeness! Lawl...praying mantis...X) Oh! And I have black hair now. T_T It was meant to turn BROWN. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *collapses laughing* That last bit "down there"? Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() P-p-p-personal cream? I was laughing my head off at that one (and that was a new thing I learnt today; who knows how useful this knowledge may come in when and if I become a shop assistant!)... just a small thing though, there's not been a lot of Reese and Remmy interaction in the last few chapters, the chapter themselves have become slightly filler-esque, but they're still humourous and sarcastic anyway... Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! It seems a little bit of a filler (unless the grocery store has an utter importance I am missing) but good. And funny! Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH OH OH! Hellew, tis me, Bandy again! : D I miss the pervert. He's my betch. We're gunna have BABIES like Britts! Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, finally! Another chapter! I liked it... I want the Pervert to explain himself, though. You're very good at dragging things out. And, finally! Another person who recognises the evil in geese! All my friends laugh everytime I run away from them, but they BITE, damnit! And it hurts! I've never met a turkey, but swans can be pretty nasty up close. Geese are evil. Okay, yeah... I'll stop ranting about them. But I'm glad someone else realises how terrificatingly awful geese are. Especially the Canadian geese. *shudders* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LIKE her gradma. shes really cool! she didnt get the information out of him in this chapter...but what about the next? that book sounds real funny...i cant believe that the teacher wrote...poor sad little man... XD lol well i cant wait for more! Love Chocolate! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought I would tell you that you're story has inspired me to use the "correct" way to enter the principals office, because I'm sure I will be doing so many a time in the coming year and I thought I would thank you for your stunning outlook. :) Oh, and I like the actual story too... (: Hope the next chapter comes son...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write more ! I cant wait that long! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so funny! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was rather interesting and funny. Perhaps there was a touch too much spacing and things could have been more together like in some paragraphs. Think too many continous sentences started with 'I' and next to each other. The writing could be improved. Anyhow. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Hee hee! Well, I definitely agree with the goose subject. We have them in our school, they can't be held in by gates or the Ag Studies people. They run RAMPANT. If we're playing soccer on the oval, they'll steal the ball and try to rape our kneecaps. It's just who they are! Well, you can use my old quote, "Geese aren't real; they're made up to scare little children, like the boogeyman or Michael Jackson." I was quite well-known for it at one point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOOT! i'm glad to see another wonderful chapter...:D i am happy! :D can't wait for more to come...waiting...geese are evil...i feel for Reese...i shall shed a tear for her *tear* my tear of the day...:D Blithe smilE |