Reviews for Trouble
AEJ325 chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Pretty, pretty funny! But some of it seemed a little out there... It didn't mesh perfectly, but anything rarely does. It has some really good potential though! And I didn't notice any grammar errors.

But then, I'm no English teacher...

Can't wait to read more!
Jainblu chapter 19 . 7/20/2008

this story

It was so sweet,

like it was a likle bit mushy towards the end, but you know it was the good kinda mushy.. like not sickeningly sweet, but just the right amount of sweetness...




How do you get to be so original, seriously of your books I've read so far I think I've yet to come across something that I thought was going to happen.

i.e. your stories are really unpredictable...

but yay, I guess that's why I like em so much.

You did a really good job _

Slightly ticked chapter 9 . 7/15/2008
I guess you have a point about the everything is made in China thing. But have you noticed that they're also made in taiwan? What bout german and swiss chocolate?

Though I would be pissed if everything was made in USA. I don't like being reminded that its a powerful country.

I agree with the Lindsay and Paris thing though.

Nice story!
MK16 chapter 19 . 7/3/2008

so increbily aww-worthy!

really great job, your main character is really hilarious

gotta love her!

again, well done! fantastic story

Sam chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
Dude I love this chapter, the 5 year old kid seemed really cute and the nickname too lol. Also I love all those animes you mentioned, I have seen every single one of them! Oh and have you read the manga for Kodocha, cuz let me tell you, it was AMAZING! Yep, so if you haven't gathered by now, I'm a total Anime/Manga freak ) cool ain't it.

Love your story... up to this chapter, but I'm sure I'll like all the rest. Keep writing entertaining, amazing, relatable stories. D
katieee chapter 3 . 5/25/2008
I like Ouran High School Host Club and Yakitate Japan. And I absolutely love Hana Kimi Japan that was taken from the manga.
Aria Deloncray chapter 19 . 5/13/2008
Great story! This was just what I needed to turn my day around.
RWW chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
aw man! I really love your stories and your wrighting style, but darnit MY name is Kelly!
Jiadee-103 chapter 19 . 3/31/2008
I loved it lmfao, i made me smile! :)

Great idea, you have talet.

Vampire Kitsune chapter 19 . 2/20/2008
hehe! Awesome -and very funny- story! I did a lot of rolling around laughing (good thing I wasn't on my bed or something). :D
moi chapter 9 . 2/18/2008
The story hysterical.

Made in China not so much.

Maybe you could do some research instead of basing your opinion on "what you've heard?" And sometimes the little that they make helps keep their families afloat. Plus, it's not fair to foist your opinions onto other cultures that you don't know very much about.
S. Kayn chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Read all of your stories

I think you're brilliantly funny

The ones I favourite, which i will in a second, are the ones I love the best out of your collection. But i love them all

Your humour is just too cool :D

and so is your writing


p.s *loves meg cabot* :D
bucketheadkt chapter 19 . 1/29/2008
Congratulations, Pinkamoo!

Your story, Trouble, has been nominated for Most Humorous (Complete)[I so put incomplete in the other message, but I meant complete... sorry!] section in our awards site, Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards. Keep up the fantastic work! ]

- Katie


SKoW Judge
MD . again P chapter 19 . 1/20/2008

I did get a little confused with who's who because of the names (blame my memory), but I love it! Such a sweet sweet ending. :D I hope you write a sequel because this story is really good.

Keep writing!
MD chapter 9 . 1/19/2008
Stuff are 'made in China' because of, yes, you got it right - cheap labor. But I really don't think they do children slavery. If it's anything, it's more like because these children's families are poor, and the children go out to work for poor wages. I should know 'cos I live in China. ;)

Anyway, that's not the point of my review (I got sidetracked), I just want to say that I love your story. It is awesome. :D I love Reese and how she gives nicknames to people. Hehehe. And I'm so jealous of her job.. I wanna work in an animal shelter! :O

Anyway, on with the next chapter!
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