|Reviews for The Deal: ArLin|
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/27/2013
''Gelé comme des statues"
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/27/2013
''aucune parole, aucune vue"
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/27/2013
''Qu'une paire de pantalon et une chemise blanche de coton apparaissent sur lui.'' would be more correct. Just saying.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 36 . 1/2/2012
oh shit! what's going to happen!
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 21 . 1/2/2012
so, sabin and none of the other psychics can detect when someone is getting raped? would that be like someone mentally screaming?
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 18 . 1/2/2012
oh, that's sooo sweet. shayne is soo good at being a flirt.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 10 . 1/2/2012
god, that sabin's a freak. sheesh, he's heartless. i wonder if we're going to find out why.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
whoa. and lin has teeth. but it's not really strong to pick on a (even annoying) little girl. let's see how you develop his character, hm?
| MidnightStaar chapter 38 . 2/15/2011
I loved it, thats all i have to say :)
| bs49184 chapter 39 . 9/30/2010
please do a sequel
i love this story :]
| CrazyWriter77 chapter 38 . 11/16/2009
wow. _ . This is one of the best stories i've read and trust me when i say i've read many, you did an awesome job, have you ever thought about publishing this? I would so buy it
| Ashley chapter 3 . 1/4/2009
hahaha oh my Love Lins personality
sarcastic and striaght forward.
He gives a vibe like he knows more than you think]
I like it
I want to know what happens with Shanye!
| Cattails chapter 38 . 12/17/2008
This was very cute and dramatic I enjoyed it a lot. I'm also quite happy it had a happy ending. Poor poor Lin...he went through so much crap O_o For that, I think Shanye should sleep on the couch for awhile *hmph*. But it was a very cute story. :D
| Barbara Gordon chapter 39 . 10/28/2008
I was going to say you did leave the perfect opening as to be another book to this. With the whole mael or whatever his name is. You never explained what happened to him. Did he leave Lin alone? Did he just magically vanish or something. . That whole sort a thing.
I have to say I love this story. Very creative, and extreamly touching. It takes a good bit for a story to really make me tear up and this one I CRIED reading it! I kept having to wipe my eyes just to see the words... Wonderful story!
| moreanonthanyou chapter 21 . 10/4/2008
Oh my. o: