Reviews for collision a rewrite
this is britt chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
i didn't expect something so powerful. i feel like i'm walking out with a black eye. you are constantly amazing me; that is a fact.
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
it has a good flow and diction. the words are weaved very nicely. keep on going.
hey maria chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Short poetry is my favorite, especially when it's as concise and powerful as this.
Alice Faraday chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
That was interesting. It reminds me a lot of this certain style...oh, what's it called...imagism?...symbolism?...derived from the haiku... not quite sure, but it's cool.

Aiden
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Thas was a really nasty image, but it definately put out a statement. The last line especially. Great job.