Reviews for Everything Changes But You
Hoodlives chapter 2 . 5/18/2007
Great start! The story seems really promising, I can’t wait to read what’s going to happen next and I’m dying to meet the infamous Mark!
Kaede Kitsurani chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Hey, I love the first chapter! I can't wait to read more.

Also, I think you meant 'glimpses' in this sentence, correct?

"For the first time in over an hour she caught glimces of something other than sea through the gaps in the clouds."
squiggle-line chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
I'm interested in seeing where this will go. There are some places that could use more detail ("Mark had been her first love, her first..everything so the evening..." and "...she'd found herself growing increasingly attached to Chase Lawson...") but I'm guessing that we'll be learning more about these characters in the future. The language flows only nitpicky suggestion would be to spell out numbers.

Please continue!
Semicharmed love chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
This is really cute. I'm really interested into seeing what happens next! Update soon. :))
vio923 chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
I posted a review a few hours ago-it seems to have disappeared and this chapter seems to be reposted. Don't know what is going on.
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