Reviews for Young Love
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
a spirited kind of, i'll get through this poem. cute. i've read a few of your things here - keep in mind, you don't have to rhyme to get your message across and have your poem be just as powerful. letting go of the rhyme scheme, in some instances, might let your poetry go new places. (or heck - stay where you're comfortable. everyone evolves into writing at their own rate.)
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Very nicely written, I like this a lot. I was really able to relate to the lines, "I love liking in secret But one day I hope That I won’t to dwell or wonder Nor worry or mope". Great work on your rhyme scheme too. Keep on writing.
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
i like that you're trying to make the site you self! that's good. let a little bit of identity spill out every once in. a while. this is a cute poem!