Reviews for Shattered
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
I really like the emotion in this, and your rhymes and alliteration in some places is very well done too. Great work and keep writing.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Wow; I really liked that. It was really good. Better than any of my best works (old stuff). And way better than my new crap. Is the poem true? If so, let me know if there's anything I can do to help. I love to do that much for people. Anyways, GREAT poem. Keep writing!