Reviews for Drool
Definition chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
LOL, absolutely brilliant!
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
XD I saw the title, and just had to read this. After I finished reading, I did one of those smilecringe things where you aren't sure if something's incredibly funny, or disgusting, or both. I think in this case, it might be both. You've written this perfectly and your word choice was excellent. Great work and thanks for the review!
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
LMAO! :D
Basara chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
hahahahaha!

nice!
McQuinn chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
HA! I like this. Your choice of words are perfect, first of all. You use "immersed" which reminds me of liquid, and you ARE writing about a guy that's drooling. ("Trickling" is another one of those words.) So those were nice touches.

"Drool" might not be the best title for this haiku, as you're not exactly describing the drool itself, but someone in the act of drooling (and a rather funny, almost pathetic one).

I have a slight question, though. Why no capitalization? Is it supposed to mean something, or are you going all "e.e. cummings" on fictionpress? :p

Nice work.

-McQuinn
ecwix chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Heh, it must've been pretty funny when the "he" or someone else noticed. :p
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
pure genius, my friend. nice work.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
i'm not usually a fan of haiku. but i can make an exception to smile at this one. cute.