Reviews for fever
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
I love this too. You are an amazing writer.

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simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
I like this a lot.. I really like hte line "you don't know, that you break me..." and "my smile's always too late"... great piece.. nice repetition at the end
this is britt chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
this is one of those poems that would be wonderful to hear at a reading. good sense of rhythm, i beleive. "i lean towards you, hoping for some tangency"- i'm going to be eternally jealous you came up with that first.