believe it or not, I actaully LOVED the ending. it might've ended...well...not happily, but it was still great! good job!

bec

wow. that was really good. uber sweet and that made the ending so friggin sad. i thought for sure that he would remember autumn because they spent so much time tigether. i really wish he'd remember. :( and you have awesome writing skills

I didn't like the ending too much.

aww that was such a bittersweet story! It would have been awesome if Alex had remembered Autumn... but I love how you left the end to the reader's imagination :]

cute. ) The ending was great. Got some deja vu going on, huh? Awesome work! Hope to read more of your stories!

you should make a sequal...

since the dr. said it was TEMPORARY.

stupid christabel.

if she was really autumn's friend then she would have been said for a while then gotten over it.

no matter how long she loved alex.

it is not that stupid girl's place to stop autumn and alex from loving eachother.

sorry, it makes me angry.

:/

but make a sequal.

please.

toodles,

midnight.

This story kinda reminded me of the song Your Guardian Angel by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus. Anyway, I liked the story.

arghh this story was good but why did you end it like that? The ending sucks! especially with the story saying "everything works out"... "Fate"... blah blah blah, lol. you ned to extend this to him remembering her! pleasee?

That was adorable, and the ending, I must say that I loved it. It was bittersweet, pure and perfect and bitter, but it leaves so much more to be desired.

And truthfully, I like the fact that you leave several loose ends untied, because it leaves the reader with something to think about, and I rarely find authors who do this, so congratulations on that.

Overall, you did a great job on the vignette, and I'm off to read more of your works.

- h.b.h.