|Reviews for There Is Just Something AboutMidNight|
| 123454321 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
The first two lines sound like rewrites of the same thought. Maybe you could choose just one? So as not to sound redundant.
Other than that, I think this is a very good piece; very concise in what you were trying to say. And you lists of attributes about midnight is sharp.
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