Reviews for like innocence
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I know this is a few years after the fact, but this is beautiful in its simplicity and barrenness. Love it. Keep writing! :)
autumnmurder chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
your poetry always makes my heart swoon.

i will forever consider you one of my greatest inspirations.

you're a doll.
bittersweet.season chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
ag! the honesty and simplicity is just killer here.

gorgeous as usual.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Wow, the images and feeling of this poem are so wonderful. I loved the lines:

"but it's just not true. i'm like melting snow,/and you can see all my flaws spill over the dirty sidewalk,"

Great job, this was awesome.