Reviews for break
Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
This is great. The dashes added to the poem. Keep writing.
nina know nothing chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
i adored how the thoughts are scattered, and broken. It makes the idea also "break" with plot of the poem.

i also adore how it tell this long story, in only nine lines. you can just picture, and relate.