|Reviews for One Way Ticket Home To You|
| Melissa Norvell chapter 5 . 1/15/2008
Another grand chapter! I'll be back next update!
| Melissa Norvell chapter 4 . 6/23/2007
Ah,someone else around here who likes to write shounen-ai. It seems harder to find those types around here then it used to be.
For your story. It's a very good first on here, though your chapters are a little short. Then again chapter length varies from author to author.
This is a captivating story and quite an interesting plot as well. I definitely like your characters, they are very real and complex.
So, *adds story to faves and alerts* You have a fan now.
Perhaps you could take the time to read some of my stories. I have a new one called Sacrifice, if you'd like to read it.
| Platinumfrost chapter 4 . 6/12/2007
PLease update this soon, your writing is highly captivating and I'd like to know what happens next!
| MlleKathy chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Thanks for the reviews on mine, I love MxM for some reason lol...I hope you write more soon!
| Vost Thenen chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
There's a good dynamic going on here with the dialogue and the relationship between Aidan and his mother, unfortunately, it's difficult to pick through. Try separating your dialogue into paragraphs as the speaker changes.
Best of luck, I'll be checking up