Reviews for Wings
Snow and Spindrift chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
this made me think of a stone angel's wings, like in a graveyard... maybe the "cracked stone" image from the first part. anyway. very well done!
pierrelourens chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Good, but I'd very much like to see this expanded. This type of writing is always good in a longer form, and I feel like this is just a sampler of what you have to offer the community.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Beautiful piece of work! Very descriptive; I liked it.

Keep writing
Nirnaeth Arnoediad chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Wow, this is really beautiful. One thing, though; "mothers" in the last paragraph should be "mother's". Other than that, great job!