Reviews for Invisible
Moth Reedfly chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
"If you would just listen one moment"

suggestion: if you would just listen for a moment"...

"What a shame, what a shame

I think it’s a chain

Like jealousy or revenge

Maybe if everyone

Truly cared

We wouldn’t need

To die alone"

comment: this is a good stanza. i like it very much.

goodluck
Ariel of Wonderland chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
Bloody brilliant. Thank you for posting this. Good job.