Reviews for The Tide Is On Its Way Back
dooley creel chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Thanx for the review on water molecules. Your poem about the tide as a metaphore is beautiful, if somewhat sad in places.

Tide rips and wave crests

Calligraphy on the sea

Whispered word unknown

Stiff legged gulls carefully step

As if not to wet their feet
twilight.wind chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
i like it :D