|Reviews for Burning Hot Embers Of Love|
| RoseBubbles chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
Thanks for your comment on Summer Love.
I really like this, poem, is it? It made me smile. I can sense the passion in the burning love. I was a little confused by some of the wording, and it seemed to loose a little passion in the middle but it was picked up at the end.
PLEASE keep writing intense poems!
| pierrelourens chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
Thank you kindly for your review, and as my profile promises I will keep an eye on your work and try reviewing.
I thought the strong image of burning embers was good, but I didn't think it had enough prevalence throughout. Also, spelling 'thought' like 'thot' takes away from the meaning of the word, and leaves the reader with a bad impression. Also, good refinement and revision would clarify and better portray your emotion and message.