Reviews for Just Some Stairs |
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kingrankar76 chapter 13 . 1/27/2009 Hey, i enjoyed they're mating but is she gonna get pregnant because jake ripped of the condom. It would be fun to see jake as a dad and Maya would be i dunno. Please update with more adoreable Jake and Kane and Maya moments |
MireMoor chapter 13 . 1/27/2009 Hiya! It's SilentWhispers00... I felt like a name change lol. I was actually squealing with excitement when I saw this was finally updated! I love Jake's reactions _ Don't worry, I will definetely be with you until the end of this story! Update asap, please! Great chapter, by the way! |
Raskal chapter 13 . 1/27/2009 I'm really into this story, and I absolutely love Maya! She reminds me of me, actually, I'm 5'4'', and I've actually called someone a hedgehog fucker... I'm clumsy too x.x But keep it coming! |
XxSiennaxX chapter 12 . 1/26/2009 I LOVE YOUR STORY! The characters are so well constructed and I really do love Jake - I think he and Maya are great for each other. Your story is beautifully written and I really appreciate the correct grammar :) Please, please update soon - PLEAASE? :D |
nascarchick chapter 12 . 12/13/2008 Great story! I can't wait for an update...there is one coming isn't there? Thanks for writing! |
ItalianQT chapter 12 . 12/3/2008 Good story so far! Maya needs to give into Jake a little more lol I think you should add a little more about the mating process and how they get marked. I thought that she would be marked as soon as they slept together but Kane said that she wasn't marked yet. Update soon! :-) |
phelps112 chapter 12 . 9/9/2008 I like what you've done with your story. Can't wait to read again. I promise to leave a more in depth review with the next chapter. |
Winter92 chapter 12 . 8/30/2008 love this story cant wait for the next chapter |
Jade.Secret chapter 12 . 8/29/2008 Oh man, its been a while since I've read just an interesting plot. I love all the mystical descriptions and the possession that Jack has over Maya. Please let them end up together Not all that twist and turns where one dies...it'll be too dramatic for my poor heart. I was scared of Kane at first stealing Maya away reading the previous chapters, but I'm really happy that he's there to protect her and that her feelings for Jack has grown in a way. Keep up w/ the interesting story..Can't wait for more |
runningXwithXtheXwerewolves chapter 12 . 8/26/2008 yay another chapter! I still want a dante, even though he really wasnt in this chapter oh and i totally want Maya's house, it seems cute! Great chapter by the way and keep up the great work! UPDATE SOON!:P |
rosieroo chapter 12 . 8/24/2008 aw jake is so cute and protective! AW! nice update! |
chocoholics anonymous chapter 12 . 8/21/2008 ha, that was cute, both this chapter and the last one, will Kane always be lonely tho? I hope some other character comes into this eventually, maybe not anytime soon or even this story, but at least to hint at tying off ends sometime way into the future. I bet u have a reason for Kane's behavior tho so I'll wait at the edge of my seat as always to see what happens next. :) fanastic writing! |
Ck90 chapter 12 . 8/20/2008 Oh my god! I found the part of marking territory so funny! Great Update! Kane really is annoying with his I want my friends girl thing! |
Sun2Storm chapter 12 . 8/20/2008 update tomorrow. that's an order private. |
atreyu love chapter 12 . 8/20/2008 haha. love the little fortune cookie tip! i was eating one, you know before i check the fortune and all of a sudden after eating one, there isnt a fortune! and im like whatt? haha. well, anywho. kane and Jake are adorable :D PLEASE UPDATE! |