|Reviews for As simple as black and white|
| Carzilla888 chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
look here I don't care what you do but all I know is this story has to continued I nearly died when he said I don't care how you two fit cause we're getting married that's the best part oh please continue this
| AJ Taylor chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
Why is it that the baby daddies always know how to get you speechless and going along with their plans?
I did like the story and the fact that they were both Christian. Good work.
| Xoder chapter 2 . 3/8/2011
The story have a great plot BUT the writing style does need work. It seems rushed.
| Lilchany chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
I love your story so far and I can't wait for you to update...if you ever. My only problem is: Why does race have to come between them? and what does;
"Yeah- Martin's from Trinidad and black like me. I guess we fit."
Martin being black have to do with fitting with her?
Aside from that I love the story so far!
P.S. I hope I didn't offend you in anyway..It's just that I'm a black woman and just wondering about the race issue...I guess I'm just a very sheltered person.
| igot4 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
Ok you cant just leave us with two chapters after that come on!
Just when it get juicy update please please!
| Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 2/17/2008
I think Connor is going to definitely get her to marry him. Biracial relationships can definitely be hard because of other people's racism. Nice work.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
It's so sad that he wished she was Hannah. Poor Gilianne. Nice start. I'm sorry for taking so long to return review. Have a lovely day.
| Nyleve Nalloc chapter 2 . 2/15/2008
I love this. My nephew is biracial, so I know how this goes. Keep updating!
| Bazooka Joy chapter 2 . 2/6/2008
Oh wow and this chapter becomes a bit more controversial...good for you. Connor seems like a pretty honorable man. Good for her...AND him. Not many men actually want anything to do with children they had in the past. I'm really liking this story a lot. Continue...please!
| Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
You know, I've thought about writing a story very similar to this one...similar situations. I realized that this coincidence does tend to happen a lot with the stories I read lol. But anyway, it's very well written. Almost as if it's from personal experience. ...is it?
| dontyouno chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
please continue writing this story