Reviews for As simple as black and white |
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![]() ![]() ![]() look here I don't care what you do but all I know is this story has to continued I nearly died when he said I don't care how you two fit cause we're getting married that's the best part oh please continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is it that the baby daddies always know how to get you speechless and going along with their plans? I did like the story and the fact that they were both Christian. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story have a great plot BUT the writing style does need work. It seems rushed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so far and I can't wait for you to update...if you ever. My only problem is: Why does race have to come between them? and what does; "Yeah- Martin's from Trinidad and black like me. I guess we fit." Martin being black have to do with fitting with her? Aside from that I love the story so far! P.S. I hope I didn't offend you in anyway..It's just that I'm a black woman and just wondering about the race issue...I guess I'm just a very sheltered person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok you cant just leave us with two chapters after that come on! Just when it get juicy update please please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Connor is going to definitely get her to marry him. Biracial relationships can definitely be hard because of other people's racism. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so sad that he wished she was Hannah. Poor Gilianne. Nice start. I'm sorry for taking so long to return review. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. My nephew is biracial, so I know how this goes. Keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow and this chapter becomes a bit more controversial...good for you. Connor seems like a pretty honorable man. Good for her...AND him. Not many men actually want anything to do with children they had in the past. I'm really liking this story a lot. Continue...please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I've thought about writing a story very similar to this one...similar situations. I realized that this coincidence does tend to happen a lot with the stories I read lol. But anyway, it's very well written. Almost as if it's from personal experience. ...is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue writing this story |