Reviews for Bleeding colours
Neaera chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
I love this. It's morbid and creative. Keep it up!
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
Yay for abstract poetry! The emotions here were powerful.. I can feel the desperation in each line as you try "painting that perfect picture" and how it just doesn't seem to turn out right. It does feel like that a lot, doesn't it? -sighs-

This was my favorite line: "And yeah I know I’m sketching an ending before the beginning began"

It's like you were already bracing yourself for another letdown.. which is a depressing thought, but the line was so amazing to me.

-adds to alert-

Much love,

Bleached Roses
Striped Candycane chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
Don't worry about the British spelling...Most of the time, I use it as well. I loved the descriptions and the way it all has a reference to paint. The best touch on this was tiny: "pain(t)". It sums up the emotions and the images in this poem perfectly.
wishing.on.echoes chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
I use British spelling too.

This was really well done, I liked it a lot.

Just wow.