Reviews for Joy
hikaruslight chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Two lines that i didn't really like:

I just fell on the floor,

-kinda ruins the feeling of floating

Thank you for bringing it into my life.

-not sure why, but it doesn't seem to fit in this poem

But, anyways! I really like this one. It has a really light feel to it. It made me think of white feathers. ... Not sure why...