Reviews for Surreal Feeling
hikaruslight chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Alrighty, I don't like:

'I am feeling different feelings'

-repetition in the same line usually sounds bad

'I'm so scared,

But I'm going for it,

I'm taking the leap,

I hope that you'll catch me,

...and you did."

-you changed from present tense to past. you should probably switch that.

And those are the things i would fix. this poem was also really good. I knew I wasn't imagining things when I said you were getting better ;)