|Reviews for Surreal Feeling|
| hikaruslight chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Alrighty, I don't like:
'I am feeling different feelings'
-repetition in the same line usually sounds bad
'I'm so scared,
But I'm going for it,
I'm taking the leap,
I hope that you'll catch me,
...and you did."
-you changed from present tense to past. you should probably switch that.
And those are the things i would fix. this poem was also really good. I knew I wasn't imagining things when I said you were getting better ;)