|Reviews for Replay|
| hikaruslight chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Stuff I don't like:
'And forever it will stay,'
-this line just has a different vibe than the rest of the poem. i think you just need to reword it to say something along the lines of: And it will stay forever.
That's all i didn't like, but when I read the last line the first time, I read it as: 'Oh, I want you there.' just thought i would mention that. it's not something that should be changed but it ends the poem on a different note.
Bring on the next poem!