Reviews for Story Of A Girl
Sam chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Oh my god, I feel like this puts my own personal feelings into words in a way.

You've done a wonderful job with this.
helzyeah chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
She craves her own white deathbed. She is only a slave to herself after all.


decribes my life to the t.

ghost of chrismas chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
I love the lines in italics.
Sakiinyourdreams chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Absolutely amazing. You really have a way with words in this piece. Keep it up. This is really great!
Lustfully Enraged chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
She’s hooked on her own broken shards, constantly trying to put them together, when they’re letter left untouched. - should be BETTER left untouched.
squeeeee chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Angsty... Who is this about if you don't mind me asking..
Addy S chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Are you okay now?
e chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Your story conveys such intense feelings. Brilliant work! )
jane speaks chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Amazing. It is really sad how I can identify with this girl.

"She is a pathological liar, the best of indecision and more addictive than methamphetamine." I love this line.
Cassie chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Nikita Johnson chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
Wonderful image painted.
Murder245 chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
I used to be like this. I'm so glad I'm not anymore.

Beautifully expressed.

~j. lynn
Lori chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
wow. i love how it's so tragically poetic. best of luck!
bex17 chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
the depressing thing about this is that this girl IS me. oh well. such is life.

D Ryu chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
OMG THANK YOU! xD [glomps to death]

"The real her never existed .She didn’t.."