|Reviews for Defiant|
| SnoopyWanderLust chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
I hope you continue this, because I am very interested to see how this relationship develops.
One suggestion, I found the phrase "about five inches off the ground" a little jarring. I realize you were probably trying to illustrate their height difference, but the sentence didn't flow for me. Maybe something a little simple like "pulled her so her toes left the ground." Something so precise as five inches just didn't fit.