Reviews for Stars and Windowsills
BrokenHeart4Eva chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
i love the imagery in this one. its beautiful and captivating
Bright Green chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
such lovely imagery and such a lovely concept
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
I like this.. the idea of clouds blockign stars is great... and the whole play on the concept of reaching for the stars is awesome.. its beautifully written and very bittersweet... I also like hte ending a lot.. slightly hopeful
FoxStorm chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
My favorite poem by you. It really painted the picture for to see. I really love it.
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
You created such pretty images - 'skyline reflections of what you were always like' (I instantly thought of the perfectly arched back) and 'walking on tiptoes and balancing yourself on that single brittle starlight-starbeam.' It reminds me of the listlessness I used to dwell in when I was younger - when dreams were so close yet far. Great work
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
This was really sad, and amazingly beautiful. The metaphors you used, and just the images you created were wonderful. This was beautiful. Great job.