Reviews for Wounds
totallyinspired chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
aww so sad. i love the rhyme and the message too. favourites! and i really like this part,

"I have to twist round to see, so I can’t be exact

But I think those are stab wounds I see in my back"

you're great at this xx
BalletManiac chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
I am SO Speachless !

You can take that as a compliment because that rarley happens, 'cause as you can see from my babbiling i talk alot !

This is WONDERFUL work ! I LOVED it !

One of the best poems I've read on this website !

Good job !

CHEERS !
cmetalangel249 chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Wow. I LOVE this. I've felt this way many times, but you've put it so perfectly in words.
aridelaine chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I like this. The imagery and the idea that sometimes aren't always seen. The last line seems to be a relief. It breaks up the serious tone but also proves a point! Keep writing! Thanks for the review!
lymli chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
this poem is wonderful with powerful meaning, I love a lot.
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
The formatting is excellent. The poem? Disturbing, to say the least... It's vivid and frightening. I'd say the rating is more of a T. There's something creepy yet honest about it. I like the last lines, as well as the "A deep dark dent" stanza. It's a good, creepy poem, though I'd suggest adjusting the rating.