Reviews for Rival Island
Annnnie chapter 11 . 7/8/2009
please please please keep going!
The Midnights Sun chapter 9 . 7/12/2007

she tried to kill herself.

would have NEVER guessed that one.

good job!
Lyingfacedown chapter 9 . 7/11/2007
haha. yay becky n jake. finally. hm... now how is lindsey n will gonna find out about them? oh no. who knows what will happen? alright. done rambling. write the next chapter son.~Lyingfacedown~
TheQuilAndInk chapter 9 . 7/8/2007
I just started reading this story today and i love it

the plot is great

wow deep with the wanting to kill each other thing

anyways please update as soon as possible

thanks :-)
whisperwar chapter 8 . 7/8/2007
cool story. but about chap 8: am i the only one who realizes that she's buck naked. as he kisses her. pressed up against a rock wall. (u didnt write in that she, or him for that matter, put back on their clothes) makes for an interesting mental picture...
Lyingfacedown chapter 8 . 7/4/2007
that was so totally weird. FINALLY lindsey and Will kissed. but, u TOTALLY forgot about becky and jake! poor them. i want to know what happens with them! they kissed a couple chapters ago and nothing has happened since! its crazy! the next one better be ALL ABOUT becky n jake since this one was ALL ABOUT lindsey and will. alright, have fun writing the next chapter.
killer chipmunk chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
but I

think the stories going a little

to have a slow chappie

that focuses on their thoughts.

Fluff it a little know?

But still good.
I'm the Evil Twin chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
very good story!
The Midnights Sun chapter 8 . 7/3/2007




Whoaa Kayy chapter 8 . 7/2/2007
yay! they kissed! but we didn't hear anything from the other two, where are they? oh well, update soon!
dark-skies chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This is a pretty good story :) lol the first chapter made me laugh.
The Midnights Sun chapter 7 . 6/8/2007
they going to like eachother.

even if i could do without the cussing, i understand it.

like, if i was stuck on an island with the guy i hate i would be cussing him out and like throwig him in the ocean.


great job.

update soon!
killer chipmunk chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
You'd think he'd be a little just a little

more how awful I mean

really she could be dead for all he knows.
Belle chapter 6 . 5/27/2007
Oh, Becky and Jake are SO going to get caught by Lindsey and Will soon! Hurry up and post the next chapter so I can find out what happens! I love the name of their cabin. I really do think that Lindsey needs to take a chill pill, though. ((yes, i know I have said that sort of thing about the past 3 chapters, but its SO true))!~Belle~
vanessa chapter 6 . 5/27/2007
fantastic job! i hope will and lindsey start being friends, it looks like they kinda like eachother as friends now. hm. lindsey AND will need to stop being a bitch though haha
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