|Reviews for Rival Island|
| Annnnie chapter 11 . 7/8/2009
please please please keep going!
| The Midnights Sun chapter 9 . 7/12/2007
she tried to kill herself.
would have NEVER guessed that one.
| Lyingfacedown chapter 9 . 7/11/2007
haha. yay becky n jake. finally. hm... now how is lindsey n will gonna find out about them? oh no. who knows what will happen? alright. done rambling. write the next chapter
| D.E. David chapter 9 . 7/8/2007
I just started reading this story today and i love it
the plot is great
wow deep with the wanting to kill each other thing
anyways please update as soon as possible
| whisperwar chapter 8 . 7/8/2007
cool story. but about chap 8: am i the only one who realizes that she's buck naked. as he kisses her. pressed up against a rock wall. (u didnt write in that she, or him for that matter, put back on their clothes) makes for an interesting mental picture...
| Lyingfacedown chapter 8 . 7/4/2007
that was so totally weird. FINALLY lindsey and Will kissed. but, u TOTALLY forgot about becky and jake! poor them. i want to know what happens with them! they kissed a couple chapters ago and nothing has happened since! its crazy! the next one better be ALL ABOUT becky n jake since this one was ALL ABOUT lindsey and will. alright, have fun writing the next chapter.
| killer chipmunk chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
think the stories going a little
to have a slow chappie
that focuses on their thoughts.
Fluff it a little know?
But still good.
| I'm the Evil Twin chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
very good story!
| The Midnights Sun chapter 8 . 7/3/2007
YOU DID IT BECAUSE YOU SECRETLY LOVE HER AND WANTED HER!
| Whoaa Kayy chapter 8 . 7/2/2007
yay! they kissed! but we didn't hear anything from the other two, where are they? oh well, update soon!
| dark-skies chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This is a pretty good story :) lol the first chapter made me laugh.
| The Midnights Sun chapter 7 . 6/8/2007
they going to like eachother.
even if i could do without the cussing, i understand it.
like, if i was stuck on an island with the guy i hate i would be cussing him out and like throwig him in the ocean.
| killer chipmunk chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
You'd think he'd be a little just a little
more how awful I mean
really she could be dead for all he knows.
| Belle chapter 6 . 5/27/2007
Oh, Becky and Jake are SO going to get caught by Lindsey and Will soon! Hurry up and post the next chapter so I can find out what happens! I love the name of their cabin. I really do think that Lindsey needs to take a chill pill, though. ((yes, i know I have said that sort of thing about the past 3 chapters, but its SO true))!Belle
| vanessa chapter 6 . 5/27/2007
fantastic job! i hope will and lindsey start being friends, it looks like they kinda like eachother as friends now. hm. lindsey AND will need to stop being a bitch though haha