Been awhile since I've reviewed. Had to catch up a bit (slightly embarrassed laugh)

I absolutely adored it. The fact that Bree brought Kendra back to the very place they first kissed, the heart to heart talk about Kendra's dad...

Bravo...(slow applause) Bravo

Uh oh, someone seems to be a little 'jelly' at their relationship. I'm wondering if we'll see more issues with Kris in the future; something tells me she isn't just background noise.
Loved the update on my 21st birthday, so thanks for this chapter!

Oh Philip...such a good older brother. Another amazing chapter; I'm so glad I found this little gem.
The more I read, I can't help but feel as though this story relates to me and my fiancee in a way. Friends obviously shocked, distant/unsupportive parents, not the 'popular' move in today's society...
Well done, Author-san. Splendid job

Awwww! I binge-read the rest of the chapters today, and I was wondering when Kendra's mom would find out.
Hmm... will she accept the daughter she has, or just be disgusted by it? Ahhhhhh the suspense is killing me.
Absolutely love this story from top to bottom. Today's update made my day less crappy, and I enjoyed every bit of it.
Best,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE

XD I love the sassiness of Kendra so much. The 'inches' joke made me burst out laughing in the middle of work like a crazy person, so now I'm explaining to my boss why. Well done, Author-san. Well done.

I have to say, it's very nice to read a femslash story that doesn't just dive straight into sex. It's well written, and I don't understand why this isn't more popular. It's fantastic.
You made sure to include the main character's thoughts each chapter, which is something so many writers forget to do. Each character is different in terms of personality and has their own unique quirks. The chapters themselves are structured nicely, and I didn't spot any of those painful spelling/gramatical errors.
This story gets my favorite and follow, and I hope to see more of it very soon.
Best regards,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE

I just came upon this and when I noticed it was created in 2007 (10 years ago!), I was briefly worried that this story was unfinished, so I'm very happy you've returned to it! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

I do really like this story and all the emotions that are experienced between Bree and Kendra. Glad to see more lesbian/gay literature out there, readily available for people to read. Keep up the good work.

Aw no! This cnt be the end! No! Say it aint so!

I really hope you decide to continue this story because I just found it and I have to say that it is great! I love your writing, the dialogue especially, and all your characters feel so real. Please update this!

I just noticed the difference in the dedication, and while I know it doesn't mean much, I'm still sorry to hear that apparently things didn't work out.

On to the subject of the actual chapter, I loved it and as I said before, I'm glad to see you are alive and kicking. Looking forward to seeing a new chapter whenever that may be.

I really liked this story! It's sweet and romantic, sure, but it has that extra something that makes it special. I really appreciate it when a story tries to interject a little bit of meaning here and there in small doses, even if it does run the risk of coming across as cliched to a jaded audience. I liked the waterfall-analogy scene quite a bit. I liked the way you portrayed Jodie taking the news, too... that's a common reaction that almost never seems to get portrayed in these sorts of stories. I suppose that's because it's not over-the-top dramatic in terms of acceptance or rejection, but still...it's what actually *happens* in reality nine times out of ten for people who aren't old and stodgy in their perception of how tolerant one should be... mild, passively expressed discomfort and steady dehumanization of a previously good friendship, family relationship, etc...

The depiction of love in the story is great. And I *really* appreciated the fact that you had Kendra back off from a torrid affair, opting to break up with her boyfriend first. You should get an award for that - lol. I almost *never* see a story that doesn't go down the "cheating out of fear of admitting the truth" route... Even though the fear and desire to do that sort of thing is understandable given how incredibly scary it can be to come out, it's still not fair to someone else and it's hard for me to empathize with a character doing it.

One critique, though: I felt things were rushed a bit between them in terms of getting them together. Despite Kendra acknowledging a few times that they still didn't know a lot about one another, the depth of emotion still just seemed a little forced at times when I thought about their background with each other. It would have been nicer to have read more interactions between the two as friends or even when dating before they became so besotted with one another. But it *was* an endearing besottedness :P

Thanks for sharing.

I am very saddened at the fact that you seem to update very infrequently...because I really really like this story _ . I'm not going to ask you to update soon, but please, keep updating and I'll keep reading. This story, at least for the moment, is worth the wait.

Beautiful. So full of emotion, so . . . ripe. And I want more!

The first part of this chapter actually had me sobbing right along with Kendra and her mother. Damn, that was typed well. Great job on that part. It was really emotional.

Bree's surprise made the chapter even better. It seems like you bring something new and touching to every portion of this you write. It never feels empty or boring. Although the waits between chapters are long, I kind of understand why; it's better to take your time and have something so gorgeous (like this) come out of it than to try and update every other week and have it be lifeless. Having said that, I won't tell you 'update soon' - I'm willing to wait if it means I'll get to read more deep chapters like this.

But still... heh... a little sooner than half a year would be sweet. See ya!

~2Free