|Reviews for The Significance Of May 21st Part One|
| GregoryHoare chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I love your writing style overall (though you've got way too many poems for me to comment them all!). This poem in particular reminds me of many a not-so-sober gig night, but its the way you've formatted it for me thats the highlight, the way it's broken up and in ways seems to have a frantic feel but retains the ability to flow smoothly and almost roll off the toungue... damn i suck at explaining things!