Reviews for Youth Of The Nation
Prince Pal chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
After having you explain the poem to me, I appreciate it even more. You are very talented.
Niels Stegeman chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Quite an interesting and peculiar (in a good sense) poem, which I have greatly enjoyed reading. It has a strong message, made more so by a good choice of words. Though I had my doubts about some of the line breaks (which is actually a very small criticism, which you shouldn't pay much attention to), the format is also effective. Good work on this and many thanks for the review. Much appreciated!
i am kelsey chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
wow. pretty moving if i may say so myself.

i like the lines

influential rhythm controls, with explicit demands.

and

behold! beelzebub's piety!

it's good to read something with a distressing topic that is able to close out in hope; it's beyond my ability to do so.