|Reviews for Fake|
| D. Rochelle chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
There is so much implication in the last line. It's lovely!
| Definition chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
The last line immerses this haiku into a deep sense of betrayal and thought. Nicely done.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
it is very specific word choice
wolves glancing, hmm.
the live art of meaningless things
how can you live without talking about everyone else?
| Basara chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
| ackronbronze chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
nice poem... i liked the tone... i saw it as the narrator was talking about someone backstabbing another person with the line "wolves glancing backwards". Nice Job!