Reviews for Optimism
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
This has such delicate imagery, I love it.

I love this "each petal to the puddle beneath this heaven we never see." Beautiful.

I would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot to me!
Definition chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
The first paragraph is vivid and very pretty. But what I love even more is how you concluded the composition in a very complete and full manner. Perfectly executed.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
I love how you take an abstract emotion or word, like optimism, and turn it into this tangible thing. So beautiful. I could see this so clearly. Keep writing! :)
Basara chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
sweet...

nice...
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
great imagery and last line...breathtaking. nice work.